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I watched you run down a dusty Paris street
With my cracked glass heart held in your palm
Cradled safe against the altar of your skin
As your heels kicked away the ghosts that dwelt
Lazy in the labyrinths that lay beneath
Magic-worn cobblestones as the day closed
Edged with the thin gold leaf of forlorn hopes.

I chased you through emerald fields in Ireland
And watched you spill out onto the grass
Like the sweet red berries of summer wine
Tumbling between my lips and clasping me in
The home that you made of limbs and love
Curling me close with my head to your chest
As you became the only thing I could taste.

I caught you in the midst of a Venetian masquerade
With black and white pearls dripping from your throat
And the gold of candles striking alight your skin
To play around the edge of that secret smile
That you held up to me like a sacred offering
Your eyes slipping past my masks as your hands
Slid like cool water and washed away my burnt sins.

I ran away from you into the embrace of New Orleans
Until the siren song of your blues wrapped around
My waist and snaked up my body in shivers
As your eyes swelled like jewels to gently ensnare
This poor beggar who had nothing more precious to offer
Than the ragged cloth woven of his heart and soul
Hurricane-battered by his own resistance.

And yet somehow, it was enough.
:iconimmortelenigma:

Author's Comments

To the keeper of my vagabond heart, as we touch the silken threads of our entwined fate.

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I am not quite sure if I am satisfied with this. It may be subject to change.

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:iconultimateoutlaw:
This was like a journey through time and place and myth and era. I adored it.

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"What is life? It is the flash of a firefly in the night. It is the breath of a buffalo in the wintertime. It is the little shadow which runs across the grass and loses itself in the sunset." Crowfoot, Blackfoot warrior and orator 1830 - 1890
:iconveilluse:
I was completely enthralled with this from the first opening lines; just utterly captivating as usual. If I could take the liberty to say so, I honestly wouldn't change a thing...

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"Life is a process of becoming, a combination of states we have to go through. Where people fail is that they wish to elect a state and remain in it. This is a kind of death." ~ Anais Nin
:iconalmost-certain:
I usually skim poems first and come back to them, but I couldn't skim this one. I mean, this is really...

Wow.

I loved the changes between stanzas.

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Believe in what I am because it's all I have today, and tomorrow who knows where we'll be (8)
:iconcinnamoncandy:
Hello! :wave:

You have been featured in my journal [link] and in this news article [link]

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:iconimmortelenigma:
Thank you very much. *Smiles* There are some things which run through time in rivulets and cannot be erased.

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Resistance is a story, surrender is an art.

"If you press me to say why I loved him, I can say no more than because he was he, and I was I." - Michel de Montaigne.
:iconimmortelenigma:
Merci, cherie...*Kisses your cheek* It is truly an honor to have these words from you.

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Resistance is a story, surrender is an art.

"If you press me to say why I loved him, I can say no more than because he was he, and I was I." - Michel de Montaigne.
:iconimmortelenigma:
Thank you very much for the compliment. *Smiles* I am very glad that you were able to enjoy it enough to absorb it on the first reading.

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Resistance is a story, surrender is an art.

"If you press me to say why I loved him, I can say no more than because he was he, and I was I." - Michel de Montaigne.
:iconimmortelenigma:
My warmest thanks, my dear. *Smiles*

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Resistance is a story, surrender is an art.

"If you press me to say why I loved him, I can say no more than because he was he, and I was I." - Michel de Montaigne.
:iconvillenueve:
Monsieur,this work is amazing and beautiful,every word is captivating and magic!

Please change nothing,it is absoulutely great!

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